Needs major fricking editing. I still enjoyed the story though. Can't recommend this to anyone until it's edited and resubmitted to readers where they can actually read it without having to add in words, correct misspellings or get lost in unending run on sentences. Lots of work to be done here but if it's done, this will be a fabulous start to a cool series. Love the names of the characters and the potential for what this story can be.