Between the thin plot, grammar errors and overall lack of editing, this book is a major fail. I can't believe I paid a dollar for this. I'm seriously mentally scarred after reading this. The angst and drama was so over the top, I can't even describe how horrified I was while reading this. I think the author had an idea she tried to put across but she doesn't execute it well at all. I don't recommend this for anyone and don't care enough to read the next book to find out what has happened to the MC's.