Cute story. Even with the obvious issues, inconsistencies and familiar plot line I really enjoyed reading this. I think with some editing this story could be even better. The characters need to be developed a bit more because Riley seemed 2 dimensional yet strived to be a full in depth MC. I liked Romeo but he was too perfect, did too many things expertly, and is unlike any college kid I've ever come into contact with. It was nice reading about him but unrealistic. I'd give this another read.